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November 21, 2010
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Make
PENTAX Corporation
Model
PENTAX K100D
Shutter Speed
1/2 second
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F/4.5
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38 mm
ISO Speed
800
Date Taken
Nov 19, 2010, 9:16:44 PM
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.moment by DanielEyre .moment by DanielEyre
Hazy nightclub steams flowing through her bare bloated veins.

Just one more night.

Just one more, and one more.
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:iconmikegoulty:
Hey Daniel,

As you may know, my name is Mike, and I am one of the admins for :iconportraitclub:. Let me start by saying thanks for taking part in our current critique event – be sure to get yourself featured by writing a couple yourself! ;)

Let me start by saying I do like this shot. I love the use of smoke, it gives the whole thing a real atmosphere.
As Shelby said, it does feel rather as if she is about to tell us a secret!

My only criticism is that her lips almost look like they are double-exposed, but in between shots they have moved. It almost reminds me of those 'wiggle the picture to see it move' cards you used to get when we were kids.

Anyway, like the work. Keep it up! Be sure to write a couple of critiques to get featured at the end of the week ;)

I hate the star rating thing... I can't summarise anything into a star... so ignore them.

Kind regards,
Mike
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Critique by lazyblazin Nov 22, 2010, 2:04:47 PM
love this... the various b/w's and grey, the lazy gaze, and parted mouth like she's about to share a secret. the crazy bokeh finishes it nicely :) i also like the faint whispy smoke trails mixed in. the lighting you've chosen shows just enough to make out great detail, and leaves lovely shadows placed nicely...i really like that her hair is slightly disheveled while the rest of her looks almost "prefect". overall i think its's her eyes that really pull you into the photo. So far this is one of my favorite portraits i've come across in a while :) :clap: i look forward to seeing more of your work
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:iconhqn89:
HQN89 Feb 23, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful shoot with nice expressions and contrast =)
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:icontigerlilly-magpie:
very dramatic.
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sinangol Dec 27, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
fantastic!
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:icondpressedsoul:
DpressedSoul Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured here, if it's OK for you! :-)
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:icondanieleyre:
DanielEyre Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Absolutely, thank you!
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DpressedSoul Dec 1, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure!
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Ankit456 Nov 30, 2010  Professional Filmographer
really awesome........ :sarcasticclap:
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:icondreamystarlight:
Oh my gosh, this is just lovely! I don't know where to begin! :)
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:icondanieleyre:
DanielEyre Nov 30, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Much appreciated, Ms. Starlight.
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:icondreamystarlight:
No problem! I love a pretty photo in the morning :)
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